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 # Golden circle
 
 ## Why
-Improve the work environment of game development teams. Because no game should be made at the expense of the team behind it.
-
-### Slogan
-- Make the same games but in better conditions
+Improve the work environment of game development teams. Because no game should be made at the expense of the team behind it and even the best team in the world cannot outperform a bad work environment.
 
 ## How
 Give every developer the tools and knowledge to take care of both their game and themselves
 
 ## What
-A platform to version their game, freely test and expand on it using efficient collaborative practices, deploying it often and fast so that 
+A platform to version their game, freely test and expand on it using efficient collaborative practices, deploying it often and fast, without overworking themselves.
+
+## Slogan
+- Make the same games but in better conditions
 
 
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